Views and comments more than welcome!

As I am posting more regularly now, and that I also have a few poems lying around that I'd like opinions on before I start knocking on the doors of any publishing places to make myself look like an idiot... I thought I'd try a few up here. I'll add a couple tonight to get the ball rolling. If you want to leave a comment, please do - but if you'd prefer to email me, crackingcheese@hotmail.com is the place to send it to. Cheers.